save a marriage tanka very much
Filed in Videos on Jul.21, 2009
one late night at three while my wife was sleeping sound i learned mo my hands typed in the shadows a part of her i could win yet i could still see my wife’s curlers on her head sleeping in the glow of my computer that showed the mogirl’s key chain of sin oh dear listener please help me save my marriage and win this from me make your own tanka verse and leave it in the comments not honeymooner my wife i won’t disparage i still like her see please win from me this lust curse and erase my …
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July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
This reminded me
I have not yet gotten my
Alaskan keychain
and other free stuff you said
I had supposedly won
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
yosano said ‘warrior’s breath
‘is for me – now let’s court small death
‘with tangles of hair
‘in the sweet fragrant air….
‘Hey! tanka for having me, Seth…’
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
congratulations
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
Mo-Girl radiates
to spawn poetry contests
over a tourist kludge -
yet my verse ought to win it -
I lost with those damned haikus.
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
my keys are too loose
to join them in unity
would be nice, so nice
foreign key chain would suffice
passed through our national spice
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
you are a excellent man
charlie, no frown necesarry
when you can still see
gleeem from the curlers. see gleem
from the curlers – not neccesasary
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
The Bee o Bee gets
this comment from me be cuz
I want to help him
sadly I suck so terrible at this
but at least I have tried it
(this counts for BOB if he wants)
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
I read ancient school books
also read the wikipedia entry
but still I feel lost
when try ing to write a
tanka poem. help me pls!
where do syllables end
if some one wants to help me
I would thank them much
see I can not win any way
because this is my entry
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
seems like excellent clean fun when you solve problems
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
Damnit I want to write my comment in poetry form but I’m too bone idle!
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
Excellent luck droppin’ that keychain in someone else’s lap!
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
ok… this is freaking hilarious! maybe the keyring should be throw back into the demon flame with which it was forged.
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
and now I just found
:/ 
): :,( >:[ )o:
out that I can not post tan
ka poem ma de out
off on ly smil ies like these:
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
please read the following miserable attempt of making a tanka poem in the voice of excellent ol’ charlie (while imagining ons-music in the background):
I ne ver was able
to rh yme or fig ure out
any thing not even a
thing like tho se syll ab les
but I want to try at least:
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
ahhah
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
his comments aren’t mean
they are full of wit and truth
if you aren’t careful
he’ll expose your despise in song
he is only a reflection
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
ournationalspace
has a wife who wears curlers
not exactly hot
but retro like doris day
or nosy mrs. kravitz
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
Huge time.
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
Oops, messed up
.
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
To do, block ournationalspace,
He spams YouTube with many comments,
What a huge mean jerk,
and now his marriage melts away,
Laugh, out, loud, he is very screwed.
_____________________
Lol.
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
…mirth…
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
Lol.
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
To do: block ournationspace.
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
I like the rhyme scheme Mr. ONS. You’re a lyrical genius!
July 21st, 2009 at 9:14 pm
ONS sings and
Youtube space listens
to songs of mixed pain
Teach us how to feel again,
Fill our hearts with like and mirth